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Yesterday you made a plan for your own story in the style of Anthony Browne.   Today I would like you to begin that story.  Please think of the characters you are including in your story and use adjectives to help put a picture in the readers mind.  


What do they look like?  How do they behave?  What do they like to do?  How do they treat each other? 


I have added a success criteria for your story below to help you know what to include.

Success Criteria

Co-Ordinates - and, but, or.


Amazing adjectives.

Apostrophe for possession. 


Challenge can you include a metaphor in your writing. 

For example -  Jack was as quiet as a mouse.  Jack was as lively as a puppy.