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Editing Writing for Kids! |First and Second Grade|

I know we have seen it before but I just wanted you to have another reminder.

Editing and Improving 


Yesterday I asked you to put together your animal adventure story, I hope it went well.  Today I would like you to edit and improve your story.  Using the success criteria below work through your story to check your writing, does it make sense and have you included all the features needed that we set our in the success criteria.  If not how can you add them and make the corrections. 


Once you have done this why don't you ask someone to read your story for you and see if they can understand and enjoy it. 


I would love to see your finished story so please send it to me if you can. 

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